07-15-2017, 08:13 PM
You realy have some delightful images here, my favourite being
the sweet embrace of whisky
against the side of a crystal glass
that thin slither holding onto the quality of the near perfect glass....just super
one small typo.... with (a) drops of air shaken and I also think this is a great image.
This is a delightful way to sell us your character, and what's not to love about her.
Need to read a few more times but for now I'll just say thanks for the read.
Best Keith
the sweet embrace of whisky
against the side of a crystal glass
that thin slither holding onto the quality of the near perfect glass....just super
one small typo.... with (a) drops of air shaken and I also think this is a great image.
This is a delightful way to sell us your character, and what's not to love about her.
Need to read a few more times but for now I'll just say thanks for the read.
Best Keith
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out