The Final Hour
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Thanks nibbed I hit that typo,

Good point JR, I think I'll say bending the wind (controlling your words)



I really like the vibe of the piece but I cant tell if the message is one of giving up or fighting back. Maybe it means by fighting you are going down. I don't like "bend in the wind to rejuvenate your power" because to me when something of someone bends to the wind they are structurally unsound so how is it rejuvenating power
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The Final Hour - by CRNDLSM - 07-08-2017, 10:30 AM
RE: The Final Hour - by Ateri - 07-12-2017, 03:44 PM
RE: The Final Hour - by CRNDLSM - 07-14-2017, 09:24 PM
RE: The Final Hour - by nibbed - 07-14-2017, 10:02 PM
RE: The Final Hour - by J.R. - 07-15-2017, 12:33 AM
RE: The Final Hour - by CRNDLSM - 07-15-2017, 01:56 AM
RE: The Final Hour - by Solstice - 07-15-2017, 07:39 AM
RE: The Final Hour - by CRNDLSM - 07-15-2017, 10:13 AM
RE: The Final Hour - by wordgobbler - 07-16-2017, 04:34 PM
RE: The Final Hour - by Raspberry Lemonade - 07-17-2017, 12:42 PM



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