07-14-2017, 09:24 PM
Thanks ateri, I changed two rhymes
ready to retire instead of grovel in the mire, cause what's a mire? And never cower instead of called a coward.
About using words, you can talk and talk and talk but things still get confused and messed up. Each paragraph rhyme is for an element to encompass all life. Thanks for commenting !
ready to retire instead of grovel in the mire, cause what's a mire? And never cower instead of called a coward.
About using words, you can talk and talk and talk but things still get confused and messed up. Each paragraph rhyme is for an element to encompass all life. Thanks for commenting !
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