< old love >
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(05-27-2017, 12:48 PM)rayheinrich Wrote:      

                                                [Image: HelenMirrenBathingSuit.jpg]
   

                                                                    < old love >
   
                                                        i remember when we first met
   
                                                          looking between your legs
   
                                                        wanting what was down there
   

                                                                        still do
   
                                                                          - - -
   

   
    Image: Famous Helen Mirren at 69 photograph (Is it cheating to use Helen Mirren. Yes.)
    (Does Helen Mirren dilute the intent of the poem? Yes.)

    Would be delighted to find out what thoughts you had while reading this... not interpretations of my words, but what the words got you to think about.
    (Though off or on-topic remarks, clever abuse, response poems, and criticism are welcome as well.)
First thought that came to mind was the loose ends we leave with people we've lusted over. It made me think of some of the women I never actually tried for in fear of rejection, yet in a heart beat would fix that mistake.
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< old love > - by rayheinrich - 05-27-2017, 12:48 PM
RE: < old love > - by ellajam - 05-27-2017, 05:40 PM
RE: < old love > - by Bits - 07-11-2017, 05:15 PM
RE: < old love > - by Keith - 07-15-2017, 12:44 AM
RE: < old love > - by Achebe - 07-15-2017, 04:55 AM



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