I am with “slow”

I am with “slow”

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07-08-2017, 09:47 PM

Hi! I just changed my poem, and have tried to give it some rhythm. I have also tried to fight against the immense urge to rhyme, though I have not completely succeeded. I would love to have more suggestions on how I could improve my writing.

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I am with “slow” - by typing mantis - 07-02-2017, 11:07 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by CRNDLSM - 07-03-2017, 12:36 AM

RE: I am with “slow” - by billy - 07-03-2017, 12:24 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by theyellowfog - 07-03-2017, 04:36 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by Jase - 07-04-2017, 07:53 AM

RE: I am with “slow” - by typing mantis - 07-06-2017, 05:49 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by tectak - 07-06-2017, 07:08 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by typing mantis - 07-07-2017, 08:49 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by typing mantis - 07-08-2017, 09:47 PM

RE: I am with “slow” - by Raspberry Lemonade - 07-17-2017, 11:41 AM

RE: I am with “slow” - by vagabond - 07-18-2017, 04:38 AM

RE: I am with “slow” - by nibbed - 07-18-2017, 05:57 AM

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