Brothers

[ellajam]

Poetry isn't easy but you can do it if you decide to put the work in. Few of us write poems that don't see some edits and reworking, sometimes drastic reworking, but the end product is often noticably better.

If this is something you would like to do and can handle comments without going off on members, you are welcome to repost your poem and work on it here, it only fails if you give up on it. Or not, your choice.