07-03-2017, 05:59 AM
Thank you, CRN! Regarding the mess in the first stanza, it was more of a perception from the character himself;
"ah the streets are littered with tin cans already, noone'd mind if i throw a cig bum on the street here"
You do make a good point regarding the first stanza, that it could definitely use some more elaboration.
"ah the streets are littered with tin cans already, noone'd mind if i throw a cig bum on the street here"
You do make a good point regarding the first stanza, that it could definitely use some more elaboration.