06-29-2017, 11:58 PM
(06-29-2017, 11:28 PM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote: These are actually some very solid suggestions. Regarding the repetition of 'are they', i thought it would add to the someone inquisitive/prying nature of shrinks. Thank you!Both are and they are soft stresses, I thought the line got away with it once but not twice.
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