06-29-2017, 10:57 PM
I'm not sure if i've done a right job on the adhering the meter, but here is the first edit:
Dear Patient, Welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s get rid of the boundaries to which you’re confined.
Let’s sit down and discuss your medical record.
Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety and hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are treatments we haven’t explored.
Do you feel like you’re in constant company?
People did tell me about your constant soliloquy.
Do you feel someone around you, spectating?
The voices: are they advising, are they debating?
Is it more like a monologue or is it a dialogue?
To who is it that you do constantly talk?
Son, Why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?
Dear Patient, Welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s get rid of the boundaries to which you’re confined.
Let’s sit down and discuss your medical record.
Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety and hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are treatments we haven’t explored.
Do you feel like you’re in constant company?
People did tell me about your constant soliloquy.
Do you feel someone around you, spectating?
The voices: are they advising, are they debating?
Is it more like a monologue or is it a dialogue?
To who is it that you do constantly talk?
Son, Why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?