06-29-2017, 09:52 PM
(06-29-2017, 09:19 PM)The Four-Eyed Cat Wrote: I have no company,
since I got fired
for being rude and
"underdeveloped
in the social department".
That’s what they called me,
when I replied to HR:
“Go fuck yourself”
followed by
“Kind regards”
Company has a nice double meaning (enterprise and companionship) but the subject doesn´t show any signs that he is lonely (and of course he doesn´t own the firm as an employee).
So this first line to me shows no real relevance for the poem as a whole. but maybe you could build more around what it means to you.
Honestly, i think the dialoge following the first two lines shows some view of frustration, but wouldn´t make me share the feeling.