Forgiven
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Hi WJames

She used to duplicate her eyes
in a pocket mirror, the carved gold
beams of light bouncing blue lasers 
back to the source.                                       Woah!

I used to duplicate her eyes
in fever dreams, on the lifeless face 
of a hog getting torn up by wolves
in the field where we first made love.             Okay, how does forgiven fit with this stanza?


surprise ending!
I think I am just...stunned?

have a blessed day!
janine
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Forgiven - by Wjames - 06-28-2017, 10:25 PM
RE: Forgiven - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-28-2017, 10:29 PM
RE: Forgiven - by vagabond - 06-29-2017, 02:15 AM
RE: Forgiven - by nibbed - 06-29-2017, 05:28 AM
RE: Forgiven - by Wjames - 06-29-2017, 08:01 AM



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