Lightly Tossed

[Wjames]

Thanks guys, I agree with you Tiger on the last stanza, I think that improves the piece, I've made the change. I personally don't see the need to add other dressings to the piece, though, especially as ranch is widely regarded as the dressing of those with unrefined palettes (whatever that means), and might add to the piece in that way.

I think the first stanza is connected to the next two, Luis, but I appreciate your thoughts nontheless.