06-27-2017, 12:43 AM
Edit 1:
Dear Patient, Welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s get rid of the boundaries to which you’re confined.
Let’s sit down and discuss your medical record:
Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety, hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are some treatments we haven’t explored.
Do you feel like you’re in constant company?
People told me about your constant soliloquy.
Do you feel that someone’s around you, spectating?
The voices: are they advising or debating?
Is it more like a monologue or is it a dialogue?
To who is it that you do constantly talk?
Son, Why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?
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Original:
Dear patient, welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s rid you of those boundaries to which you’re confined.
But first, please sit down and let’s discuss your medical record.
Let’s see: Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety and hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are so many treatments we haven’t yet explored.
Here it says that you feel like you’re in constant company,
the medical staff did tell me about your constant soliloquy.
May i ask, do you feel a presence around you, spectating?
And regarding those voices you hear; do they advise or are they debating?
When was it that you turned your monologue into dialogue?
Is it to your sister, or your parents to who you constantly talk?
Son, why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?
Dear Patient, Welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s get rid of the boundaries to which you’re confined.
Let’s sit down and discuss your medical record:
Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety, hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are some treatments we haven’t explored.
Do you feel like you’re in constant company?
People told me about your constant soliloquy.
Do you feel that someone’s around you, spectating?
The voices: are they advising or debating?
Is it more like a monologue or is it a dialogue?
To who is it that you do constantly talk?
Son, Why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?
----
Original:
Dear patient, welcome to the asylum of your mind.
Let’s rid you of those boundaries to which you’re confined.
But first, please sit down and let’s discuss your medical record.
Let’s see: Schizophrenic disorders, Anxiety and hemorrhages,
all documented in one-hundred-and-forty-nine pages.
There are so many treatments we haven’t yet explored.
Here it says that you feel like you’re in constant company,
the medical staff did tell me about your constant soliloquy.
May i ask, do you feel a presence around you, spectating?
And regarding those voices you hear; do they advise or are they debating?
When was it that you turned your monologue into dialogue?
Is it to your sister, or your parents to who you constantly talk?
Son, why won’t you leave the dead behind?
Within the asylum of your mind?