lakefront (edit)

[vagabond]

edit 1, vaga and nibbed

nestlings and mom cry
falcon in hedge
takes off with full talons

nest full of cries
falcon in forsythia
flight with claws full

honestly I prefer the previous version! 
the first and last line resemble, cries and flight nearly rhyme and the word´s position is inversed in a similar way as full.. then i like the thought of the nest being falcon mommy´s nest and the prey she caught in the last line is for her kids.  and falcon in forsythia is a nice alliteration, the reader spends a little time to admire it while the falcon waits for her prey.