Crush on an Artistic Babe
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Hi szczepan, I haven't seen you 'round in a few days
or I've missed you in another forum. Interesting poem.


She spoke in words like simile fests
and
Her sketches reminded me of Rorschach Tests
I was entranced and a little hornswoggled              I had to get the dictionary for that cool word.
Mainly self-inflicted                                               the speaker "got the better" of himself?
but                                                                     not sure these single words should be so lonely
hopelessly mind boggled.
 
Emotions bottled up, things bottomed out               
This expression thing. What’s it about?
So                                                                      another lonely word needs to be with friends
my own cacophonies, I screeched
Finger paintings, I bleached                                 
Still                                                                     whoops
I’m in other ways frustrated
with what I have created.


the amazing thing about the poem, is I felt an incredible
sense of rush or hyper-thought, and I am almost certain
that was deliberate. This is kind of a love poem, that needs
direction or maybe more background. Have a wonderful night.

janine
there's always a better reason to love
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Messages In This Thread
Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Szczepan - 06-19-2017, 12:03 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by vagabond - 06-20-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Richard - 06-20-2017, 11:43 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Chorus - 06-21-2017, 12:18 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by ellajam - 06-21-2017, 09:37 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Voodoogirl - 06-24-2017, 06:00 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by nibbed - 06-26-2017, 12:22 PM



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