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06-26-2017, 02:59 AM
Thanks nibbed, I need to rework the poem, it addresses the prey but obviously not clearly. I'll work on it. Your point about forsythia signaling yellow is true, maybe it doesn't belong here. Thanks again.
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lakefront (edit) - by ellajam - 06-25-2017, 08:24 PM
RE: lakefront - by vagabond - 06-25-2017, 09:08 PM
RE: lakefront - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 01:17 AM
RE: lakefront - by nibbed - 06-26-2017, 02:00 AM
RE: lakefront - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 02:59 AM
RE: lakefront (edit) - by vagabond - 06-26-2017, 10:09 PM
RE: lakefront (edit) - by ellajam - 06-26-2017, 10:28 PM
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