06-25-2017, 10:23 AM
Hi Tiger the lion,
Cross
Some days you are unforgiving.
Other days it’s me.
Who dies at the confluence?
When I saw the word Cross,
right off I thought of the Cross of Calvary.
How is it unforgiving?
Though the cross may represent the Crimson Flow,
how does a confluence fit in?
Does the title represent a verb and not a noun?
I wanted to make the poem 6 lines.
Forgiveness is healing, in both directions.
Maybe that's the confluence, when forgiveness flows
and the one who dies, dies to self?
So much to consider.
Best wishes to you!
Janine
Cross
Some days you are unforgiving.
Other days it’s me.
Who dies at the confluence?
When I saw the word Cross,
right off I thought of the Cross of Calvary.
How is it unforgiving?
Though the cross may represent the Crimson Flow,
how does a confluence fit in?
Does the title represent a verb and not a noun?
I wanted to make the poem 6 lines.
Forgiveness is healing, in both directions.
Maybe that's the confluence, when forgiveness flows
and the one who dies, dies to self?
So much to consider.
Best wishes to you!
Janine
there's always a better reason to love