Anniversary
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(06-21-2017, 06:03 AM)Richard Wrote:  Anniversary

Where did the time go?”
asks a woman to her husband
of twenty years next month. I like what your doing with time here.  Is the husband 20, have they been married 20
I don't know,” he replies
whimsically, without thinking. And how you use tone to change the meaning of a phrase that seeks meaning.

She fakes a smile,
his disappears. The contrast and intersection here tie the people together

I don't know,” he repeats,
his tone different.
I know dear, I know,” she comforts, in this ambiguous understanding
pretending to have an answer.that you seem to understand very well

I still don't really know what prose is
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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Messages In This Thread
Anniversary - by Richard - 06-21-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Anniversary - by Tiger the Lion - 06-21-2017, 07:20 AM
RE: Anniversary - by Waneerie - 06-21-2017, 08:01 AM
RE: Anniversary - by Richard - 06-21-2017, 09:13 AM
RE: Anniversary - by CRNDLSM - 06-24-2017, 10:27 AM



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