06-22-2017, 10:48 PM
Thanks for the advice Joe and Ella! Everything in the poem relates back to an experience for me, a little bit like an inside secret, which could be why certain things don't make as much practical sense, and I meant it to be a bit cryptic in that way. Sorry if it's too confusing! I'll see what I could do to make it a bit more clear using your notes. And thank you for the tip on editing Ella! I wasn't sure why that happened.
If you want something you've never had, you have to do something you've never done. -Unknown