06-20-2017, 07:10 AM
I've never tried poetry like this before and wouldn't if it weren't for Richard. Thank you for inspiring me and giving me some good pointers!
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Edit 1:
A prince of the sky;
Self-proclaimed.
Soaring through the heavens,
a celestial throne.
No contempt for balance,
When goals are in reach.
A middle ground in air,
Was hard to be found
and had resulted in
a grieving father.
Who witnessed light falling,
with tears of melted wax.
A crashing yellow sun
kissing a blue heaven farewell,
birthing green pastures below,
where sheep merrily roam,
confined like dreams.
Original;
The flight of Daedalus,
soaring.
No other can deny
the fall of Icarus.
A grieving father,
Witnessing a falling light.
Tears made of melted wax.
A crashing yellow sun.
kissing the blue heavens farewell,
birthing green pastures below.
where sheep merrily roam,
confined like dreams.
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Edit 1:
A prince of the sky;
Self-proclaimed.
Soaring through the heavens,
a celestial throne.
No contempt for balance,
When goals are in reach.
A middle ground in air,
Was hard to be found
and had resulted in
a grieving father.
Who witnessed light falling,
with tears of melted wax.
A crashing yellow sun
kissing a blue heaven farewell,
birthing green pastures below,
where sheep merrily roam,
confined like dreams.
Original;
The flight of Daedalus,
soaring.
No other can deny
the fall of Icarus.
A grieving father,
Witnessing a falling light.
Tears made of melted wax.
A crashing yellow sun.
kissing the blue heavens farewell,
birthing green pastures below.
where sheep merrily roam,
confined like dreams.