Crush on an Artistic Babe
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Love the poem! While it clearly aims at portraying infatuation and the prudish clumsiness sometimes included with that, i feel it does have a deeper meaning - laid open by the second stanza.

(06-19-2017, 12:03 PM)Szczepan Wrote:  She spoke in words like simile fests
and
Her sketches reminded me of Rorschach Tests                                        Love the rhyme here, Personally i'd describe the words you mentioned in the prev. line as                
I was entranced and a little hornswoggled                             Rorschach test, but that's just personal taste!
Mainly self-inflicted
but
hopelessly mind boggled.
 
Emotions bottled up, things bottomed out                            Love the flow in this sentence, especially bottled up / bottomed out
This expression thing. What’s it about?
So
my own cacophonies, I screeched
Finger paintings, I bleached
Still
I’m in other ways frustrated
with what I have created.
Thanks for sharing!
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Messages In This Thread
Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Szczepan - 06-19-2017, 12:03 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by vagabond - 06-20-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-20-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Richard - 06-20-2017, 11:43 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Chorus - 06-21-2017, 12:18 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by ellajam - 06-21-2017, 09:37 PM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by Voodoogirl - 06-24-2017, 06:00 AM
RE: Crush on an Artistic Babe - by nibbed - 06-26-2017, 12:22 PM



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