06-20-2017, 06:56 AM
Love the poem! While it clearly aims at portraying infatuation and the prudish clumsiness sometimes included with that, i feel it does have a deeper meaning - laid open by the second stanza.
(06-19-2017, 12:03 PM)Szczepan Wrote: She spoke in words like simile festsThanks for sharing!
and
Her sketches reminded me of Rorschach Tests Love the rhyme here, Personally i'd describe the words you mentioned in the prev. line as
I was entranced and a little hornswoggled Rorschach test, but that's just personal taste!
Mainly self-inflicted
but
hopelessly mind boggled.
Emotions bottled up, things bottomed out Love the flow in this sentence, especially bottled up / bottomed out
This expression thing. What’s it about?
So
my own cacophonies, I screeched
Finger paintings, I bleached
Still
I’m in other ways frustrated
with what I have created.

