Jinni
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(06-13-2017, 09:25 AM)vagabond Wrote:  Do you want to die quick
like the lightning-crack of dynamite    I´d either put an “a” infront of “crack” or leave the “an” infront of “asteroid impact” out.


in a fragrant funeral sheets?    sheet?
Fixed. Facepalm. Thank you.
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Messages In This Thread
Jinni - by Lizzie - 06-13-2017, 03:56 AM
RE: Jinni - by vagabond - 06-13-2017, 09:25 AM
RE: Jinni - by Lizzie - 06-13-2017, 09:31 AM
RE: Jinni - by Richard - 06-13-2017, 12:14 PM
RE: Jinni - by Lizzie - 06-16-2017, 08:12 AM
RE: Jinni - by nibbed - 06-13-2017, 01:09 PM
RE: Jinni - by Achebe - 06-17-2017, 05:42 PM
RE: Jinni - by Donald Q. - 06-18-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: Jinni - by tectak - 06-20-2017, 11:42 PM
RE: Jinni - by vagabond - 06-21-2017, 03:20 AM
RE: Jinni - by tectak - 06-21-2017, 03:54 AM
RE: Jinni - by Lizzie - 06-21-2017, 02:48 AM
RE: Jinni - by Todd - 06-21-2017, 04:32 AM
RE: Jinni - by CRNDLSM - 07-09-2017, 11:49 PM
RE: Jinni - by Todd - 07-10-2017, 04:34 AM
RE: Jinni - by Lizzie - 07-11-2017, 09:28 AM



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