06-13-2017, 01:37 AM
High Summer
High summer roadkill:
was it pleasanter to pass
not knowing knowing?
Hi, dukealien.
This is very sad.
I would change the word "pleasanter",
it looks too much like pheasant or peasant.
It is a brave poem, though! Well, kinda brave.
I hope today you are spared of all roadkill
and happy sunshine mixed with good health
brightens your day!
janine
High summer roadkill:
was it pleasanter to pass
not knowing knowing?
Hi, dukealien.
This is very sad.
I would change the word "pleasanter",
it looks too much like pheasant or peasant.
It is a brave poem, though! Well, kinda brave.
I hope today you are spared of all roadkill
and happy sunshine mixed with good health
brightens your day!
janine
there's always a better reason to love