Edit 1: The Searing Flame
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Thanks alot for these kind words Nibbed!

I'm going to take these points into consideration and think how i can make it better! Regarding your first one (on elimination) - What do you think of
"Insurmountable strength (flows) while i hold the world by its reins"?
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Edit 1: The Searing Flame - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-10-2017, 03:50 AM
RE: The Searing Flame - by nibbed - 06-10-2017, 04:30 AM
RE: The Searing Flame - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-10-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: The Searing Flame - by nibbed - 06-11-2017, 01:08 AM
RE: The Searing Flame - by Richard - 06-10-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: The Searing Flame - by Achebe - 06-10-2017, 12:51 PM
RE: The Searing Flame - by The Four-Eyed Cat - 06-10-2017, 08:55 PM
RE: The Searing Flame - by Achebe - 06-10-2017, 10:11 PM
RE: The Searing Flame - by ellajam - 06-10-2017, 10:24 PM



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