High Summer
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Glad this got across despite the twisty ending.  (And the title even has a... what's the singular of "progeny?")

@Jana - This is barely, if at all, a haiku - there are much better on this site, not to mention in the world at large.  Might do as a Zen death poem, with a little revision... have to secretly keep that in mind for when the guy with the scythe and the hourglass shows up.  (Secretly since a death poem is supposed to be spontaneous  Big Grin  .)
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High Summer - by dukealien - 06-06-2017, 12:02 PM
RE: High Summer - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 08:18 PM
RE: High Summer - by LunaDeLore - 06-07-2017, 05:14 AM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-08-2017, 10:25 PM
RE: High Summer - by Brownlie - 06-10-2017, 05:29 PM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-11-2017, 07:25 AM
RE: High Summer - by Brownlie - 06-11-2017, 03:01 PM
RE: High Summer - by Achebe - 06-11-2017, 07:47 AM
RE: High Summer - by Lizzie - 06-11-2017, 07:54 AM
RE: High Summer - by Achebe - 06-11-2017, 07:59 AM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-11-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: High Summer - by vagabond - 06-11-2017, 09:23 PM
RE: High Summer - by nibbed - 06-13-2017, 01:37 AM



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