06-07-2017, 05:14 AM
(06-06-2017, 12:02 PM)dukealien Wrote: High Summerdukealien,
High summer roadkill:
was it pleasanter to pass
not knowing knowing?
it's amazing how short form poetry can impact us when reading, and i think ending this work way you did
truly gave it an impact that otherwise could be lost in a meatier poem.
Good work.
Luna
In your own, each bone comes alive
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)
the skeleton jangles in its perfunctory sleeve....
(Chris Martin)