high summer (after dukealien)
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(06-06-2017, 10:49 PM)Jana Wrote:  
(06-06-2017, 10:05 PM)ellajam Wrote:  
(06-06-2017, 09:47 PM)Jana Wrote:  Ha! Do you by chance live in tourist territory?
I do, summer, nice to see it come, nice to see it go. Smile Maybe

ripe tomatoes
weekenders and turkey vultures
feast

what do you think?
An improvement. Clarifying. Although, the first made me picture turkey vultures eating tourists. Quite funny.
hhmmm (or yummmm). Big Grin

I really meant the vultures clean up the roadkill, I might need winding roads.
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high summer (after dukealien) - by ellajam - 06-06-2017, 08:57 PM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 09:47 PM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by ellajam - 06-06-2017, 10:05 PM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 10:49 PM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by ellajam - 06-06-2017, 11:08 PM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by dukealien - 06-07-2017, 10:49 AM
RE: high summer (after dukealien) - by ellajam - 06-07-2017, 11:06 AM



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