High Summer
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Yes, indeed. It was more pleasant to pass not knowing knowing. Clever phrase. Nice flow. I haven't read much Haiku, so can't comment on the style itself. What I can say is this hits something universal we all experience and expresses it eloquently. It's a nice contrast with the unpleasant imagery generated with the phrase "High summer roadkill." It makes me want to read more Haiku.
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High Summer - by dukealien - 06-06-2017, 12:02 PM
RE: High Summer - by Jana - 06-06-2017, 08:18 PM
RE: High Summer - by LunaDeLore - 06-07-2017, 05:14 AM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-08-2017, 10:25 PM
RE: High Summer - by Brownlie - 06-10-2017, 05:29 PM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-11-2017, 07:25 AM
RE: High Summer - by Brownlie - 06-11-2017, 03:01 PM
RE: High Summer - by Achebe - 06-11-2017, 07:47 AM
RE: High Summer - by Lizzie - 06-11-2017, 07:54 AM
RE: High Summer - by Achebe - 06-11-2017, 07:59 AM
RE: High Summer - by dukealien - 06-11-2017, 11:09 AM
RE: High Summer - by vagabond - 06-11-2017, 09:23 PM
RE: High Summer - by nibbed - 06-13-2017, 01:37 AM



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