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It's in the forum where I want to post
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I found the poem to be intellectually stimulating
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How much I dislike the poem
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2 5.26%
It pushes up against one of my pet peeves
5.26%
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I'm familiar with the author's style
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I felt like I was able to understand it's meaning
10.53%
4 10.53%
Whether or not I made an emotional/empathic connection with the poem
13.16%
5 13.16%
How much time I expect the critique to take
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4 10.53%
The number of overall crits a poem has gotten
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6 15.79%
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Bad Poetry
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(06-01-2017, 05:35 AM)Lizzie Wrote:  So, serious question (directed at no one in particular): how do you approach critting a piece that is genuinely bad? Not bad in just one way, but fairly crappy in several areas (grammar, punctuation, format, accessibility of imagery, sonics, conceit, meter, etc). Where do you start?

I find it hard to distill the "essence de manure" into a reasonable word limit. Should I just stick with one flaw and go with it? How do you determine which errors are the most egregious?


Sometimes I just can't, can't use the energy or time to try to be constructive. But when I can, I'll crit if I can focus on one thing that seems right and at least one point where it seems the poem is trying to do something identifiable and I have a hope that something I say can help the poem get there.

We all start somewhere. When someone seems to have put the effort in to try it would be great if they could get some usable feedback. But nobody has to crit every poem, we can share the load. Smile

(06-01-2017, 09:43 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  If I can't unpack a poem I leave it alone. http://slideplayer.com/slide/6107874/
Solid link. I definitely crit sometimes before I unpack, usually if something seems so good I worry that it might be cut if I don't stand up for it or if something stands out as off and I have a clear idea of how it might be improved.
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Messages In This Thread
Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-01-2017, 05:35 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Todd - 06-01-2017, 05:42 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-27-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by CRNDLSM - 06-01-2017, 06:34 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-01-2017, 06:40 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by milo - 06-01-2017, 06:49 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by billy - 06-01-2017, 07:01 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by ellajam - 06-01-2017, 07:52 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by QDeathstar - 06-01-2017, 07:56 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Wjames - 06-01-2017, 09:18 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by just mercedes - 06-01-2017, 09:43 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by ellajam - 06-01-2017, 10:24 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by just mercedes - 06-01-2017, 10:43 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by nibbed - 06-24-2017, 03:49 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by QDeathstar - 06-24-2017, 08:39 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-24-2017, 02:30 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by just mercedes - 06-24-2017, 02:57 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-25-2017, 04:25 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-25-2017, 04:54 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Keith - 06-24-2017, 11:47 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 04:24 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by vagabond - 06-25-2017, 05:03 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-25-2017, 05:09 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 05:19 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by vagabond - 06-25-2017, 05:25 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 05:25 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by billy - 06-25-2017, 11:31 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-25-2017, 05:04 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by ellajam - 06-25-2017, 08:44 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-26-2017, 01:05 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by billy - 06-26-2017, 01:51 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Achebe - 06-25-2017, 01:01 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 05:33 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 05:43 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by billy - 06-25-2017, 11:20 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 05:45 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 06:02 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 06:15 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 06:28 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by just mercedes - 06-25-2017, 07:22 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 07:26 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 07:31 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Lizzie - 06-25-2017, 04:36 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-25-2017, 04:48 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by QDeathstar - 06-25-2017, 12:41 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 01:32 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-25-2017, 01:33 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rowens - 06-25-2017, 02:14 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by QDeathstar - 06-27-2017, 01:06 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-27-2017, 02:16 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-27-2017, 02:18 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by rayheinrich - 06-27-2017, 05:50 PM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-28-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-28-2017, 06:56 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by just mercedes - 06-28-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: Bad Poetry - by Leanne - 06-28-2017, 08:35 AM



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