F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)

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F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision)

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05-27-2017, 12:36 AM

Because poems are never done. I've returned to this one after enough distance and tried to improve it. Revision is up.

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F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 04:03 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 04:59 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-25-2012, 05:01 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:08 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Leanne - 09-25-2012, 05:12 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 05:20 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-25-2012, 06:54 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-25-2012, 07:11 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-26-2012, 02:02 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 02:41 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by billy - 09-26-2012, 07:33 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-26-2012, 08:12 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Aish - 09-27-2012, 02:46 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Philatone - 09-27-2012, 12:45 PM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing - by Todd - 09-27-2012, 07:50 PM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Todd - 05-27-2017, 12:36 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Keith - 05-27-2017, 01:38 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Todd - 05-27-2017, 05:30 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Richard - 05-28-2017, 05:06 AM

RE: F*%ing is a Metaphor for F*%ing (Revision) - by Todd - 05-29-2017, 12:59 AM

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