05-26-2017, 10:21 AM
Great title, moving. Aristotle/axolotl and in my mind, alcohol, all works well. Tight, fun to read but brings up a lot of emotion, pets and parents' carelessness. And alcoholic blundering in its tone. A flavor-packed bite, thanks for posting it.
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