05-25-2017, 01:46 PM
(05-25-2017, 01:13 PM)just mercedes Wrote: low tide KapitiWonderful. A part of me wanted it to end after 'sand', - the last 2 lines improve the poem but at a slight cost to the subtlety of the first 3.
terns and oystercatchers write
haiku in wet sand
five seagulls a line of print
spelling m m m m m
Paul