That wave of silence

[CRNDLSM]

Howdy whoever you are, things I do and don't like,
At first the rhyme scheme was the only thing I liked about this, caught me off guard and the rhythm was alright, then the rhyme scheme irritated me I didn't get it just seemed haphazard and forced, then I plotted it out and I appreciated it again, like a interesting drum lick. 

THAT WAVE OF SILENCE

So we hid ourselves in a bush. A
There's no way I'll be driving.b
Have you seen the size of that tush?a really?
I was held in by Dr. Bloom c should I get the reference?
Across the crescent shaped room,c
Early exchanges are thriving. B ilots of them?

With only the rays of dawn cast upon it, a
Everything the room holds becomes more clear:b
Empty space reveals buoyant specks of grime,c
The carpet awakens ancient fits of vomit,a
And the shelves expose concealed cans of beerb
Whose neglected leaks drenched lost items.d iI don't like anything about this line, whose, leaks, beer
The lives seem varied. Yet from hijab to bonneta
They all look ahead and they all lack fear,b
Bearing only a fraction more time.c
Minute by minute the room lightens.d I I like the slow development, but I don't understand, the confusion isn't holding my interest

But with a steady crank of the door handle,a
The goose bump wind which its opening broughtb don't like opening brought, yukky,
Causes all heads to fixate on one man, who looksc
A day away from blowing sixty candles.areally?
So to avoid their discrete ways from being caught,bthis sounds like kids being hooligans
All of them ride that wave of conscious silence.dI feel like this should be deep or could be deep
In an attempt to retrieve noise, the man dandles. Aand dandling totally lost me
Forced sniggers greet the act. That failed, he must have thought.bI feel like your forcing your way to the ending
At the sight of this act, the males repress right hooks.cmales... documentary style
So he parts, too aware of the threat of violence.dand the ending just ends