Catch that Pigeon
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Hi Keith - I like your imagery, but I'm not altogether sure of what the pigeon represents - the fligh of imagination? I like the contradiction I feel in 'the freedom of tired flight' and the image of someone sitting closed off from the world, relying on messages to get a sense of it. Not sure of the line 'I pick up my phone and I leave them', and can't understand why the narrator, who seems to connect with the world only through the pigeon, would hope he wouldn't come back.
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Catch that Pigeon - by Keith - 05-23-2017, 05:07 AM
RE: Catch that Pigeon - by just mercedes - 05-23-2017, 08:09 AM
RE: Catch that Pigeon - by Keith - 05-25-2017, 05:34 AM
RE: Catch that Pigeon - by nibbed - 05-24-2017, 03:02 AM
RE: Catch that Pigeon - by vagabond - 05-25-2017, 05:11 AM



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