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05-22-2017, 08:07 AM

(05-22-2017, 05:29 AM)Wjames Wrote: The only crit I can offer is to change "yearned" to "yearns" as it is not in the past tense (that stanza is beautiful by the way).

Oops, yes! Changed it.
Thanks

all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?

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< having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 12:47 PM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by Wjames - 05-22-2017, 05:29 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 08:07 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by just mercedes - 05-22-2017, 08:43 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 11:04 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by nibbed - 05-23-2017, 08:01 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 09:03 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by ellajam - 05-23-2017, 11:04 AM

RE: < having talked to an angel > - by rayheinrich - 05-23-2017, 11:21 AM

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