The Lawnmower
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(05-21-2017, 09:45 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  
(05-21-2017, 09:02 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  The last line is a question that doesn't seem that rhetorical. The protagonist doesn't know why, and I, as a reader,
am content to accept the mystery if necessary. Though I think it might have something to do with the obviously ironic lines:
"Paper plates / are good for mixing paints" since they're utterly unsuitable for this purpose. I think the whole poem revolves
around  Jenny Agutter, as each line, especially the "hole" one, can be directly linked to one of her characters.
I wanted to say 'Paper plates ARE suitable for mixing paint, or using as a temporary palette, for an artist. Nothing ironic there, for me.' but we're not supposed to comment on a crit, so I won't.  >Big Grin<

    Oh... I just remembered rolling one up and trying to mix a gallon of house paint with it. Total mess.
    But artsy paint... yeah, makes sense unless you have cats.
                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?


Messages In This Thread
The Lawnmower - by shemthepenman - 05-21-2017, 07:44 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by just mercedes - 05-21-2017, 08:08 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by Achebe - 05-21-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 09:02 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by just mercedes - 05-21-2017, 09:45 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 09:51 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by ellajam - 05-21-2017, 10:23 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-21-2017, 12:52 PM
RE: The Lawnmower - by billy - 05-21-2017, 11:20 AM
RE: The Lawnmower - by shemthepenman - 05-21-2017, 10:41 PM
RE: The Lawnmower - by rayheinrich - 05-22-2017, 06:07 AM



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