Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling

Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling

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05-21-2017, 05:22 AM

Hey all,
I decided to edit this poem by adding some punctuation and changing some of the wording. If anyone could let me know if this is an improvement over the previous version, it would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks all,
Richard

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Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling - by Richard - 04-30-2017, 11:45 AM

RE: the loneliest feeling - by dukealien - 04-30-2017, 12:56 PM

RE: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 04-30-2017, 01:53 PM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by homer1950 - 05-02-2017, 03:36 PM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by nibbed - 05-03-2017, 02:55 AM

RE: First Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-03-2017, 12:01 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-21-2017, 05:22 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by dukealien - 05-21-2017, 07:00 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by billy - 05-21-2017, 11:54 AM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-21-2017, 12:40 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Lizzie - 05-24-2017, 01:47 PM

RE: Second Edit: the loneliest feeling - by Richard - 05-26-2017, 12:32 PM

RE: Fourth Edit: The Loneliest Feeling - by Richard - 05-31-2017, 11:48 AM

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