How Easy It Is

[Lizzie]

the only word I wondered about was “fine”.. so I thought maybe you could write:
“how it don´t fray anymore that our rope has frayed”   that way you´d have a similar repetition as in the 3rd stanza.. although it would change the meaning.
and my use of “fray” as a noun may be wrong, in that case forget it, it was just an idea 

anyway, I like how you sculpt those questions in a poem (how it can be that love and heartache fade)

Agreed, "fine" had to go, for sure. That last stanza needs work, no question. This is what happens when you write something and post it before a proper waiting period. I need to wait at least a week to make sure it's not god awful. Let this be a lesson to everyone.....