05-17-2017, 07:59 PM
(05-17-2017, 02:38 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: IMG 34674342735
God, you're beautiful
in this one.
You'd just stepped out
of the water and were reaching
for a towel.
There are still bits of ocean
shimmering on your shoulders
and sand in your smile.
I need to save this.
the only thing i thing puzzled about is "in this one"
- if " this one" refers to a foto then the image is saved already and the last line redundant. (except if you wrote "i needed to save this")
- if "this one" refers to a bikini the woman is wearing or something like that then it makes perfect sense.
ah..that´s just me, complicating things.
i like it, an image of an image, from the viewer´s eye.
p.s. i tried to click the image..