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First Edit: My Friend Back Home

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05-17-2017, 01:12 PM

Hey all,
I decided to experiment a bit with this revision, so please let me know if you think it made this piece better or worse.

Thanks,
Richard

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RE: My Friend Back Home - by Keith - 05-17-2017, 07:11 AM

RE: First Edit: My Friend Back Home - by Richard - 05-17-2017, 01:12 PM

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