05-15-2017, 12:55 PM
Vag, you wrote that nice "stones" poem and now this.
The forced end rhymes are quite bad. You can do better.
The forced end rhymes are quite bad. You can do better.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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division of good and bad
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division of good and bad - by vagabond - 05-15-2017, 09:30 AM
RE: division of good and bad - by Achebe - 05-15-2017, 12:55 PM
RE: division of good and bad - by vagabond - 05-15-2017, 02:08 PM
RE: division of good and bad - by rayheinrich - 05-16-2017, 02:59 AM
RE: division of good and bad - by vagabond - 05-16-2017, 06:24 AM
RE: division of good and bad - by rayheinrich - 05-16-2017, 09:01 AM
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