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My mother’s chrysanthemum

My mother’s chrysanthemum
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05-15-2017, 04:39 AM (This post was last modified: 05-15-2017, 04:40 AM by Leanne.)
Quote:How we cut or pluck pieces
off ourselves: nails, hair, eyebrows. Children.

Fuck.

That uncomfortable tension present in the mother/daughter bond is strongly realised in this poem, and that last stanza -- just fuck.  My glasses are foggy.
It could be worse
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Messages In This Thread
My mother’s chrysanthemum - by just mercedes - 05-14-2017, 04:04 PM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by 67eager - 05-14-2017, 04:36 PM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by ellajam - 05-14-2017, 07:59 PM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by Leanne - 05-15-2017, 04:39 AM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by billy - 05-15-2017, 07:30 AM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by rayheinrich - 05-16-2017, 11:19 AM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by just mercedes - 05-16-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: My mother’s chrysanthemum - by Keith - 05-17-2017, 06:47 AM



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