First Edit: Wandering

First Edit: Wandering

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05-14-2017, 05:09 AM

Hey Szczepan and makeshift,
I edited the poem. I took some advice from tectak that he had for another one of my poems and added some punctuation. I decided to experiment with the punctuation, so please tell me if it works to make the poem better or worse.

Cheers,
Richard

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First Edit: Wandering - by Richard - 05-09-2017, 08:01 AM

RE: Wandering - by Szczepan - 05-11-2017, 12:01 AM

RE: Wandering - by Richard - 05-11-2017, 05:58 AM

RE: Wandering - by makeshift - 05-13-2017, 02:46 AM

RE: Wandering - by Szczepan - 05-13-2017, 03:26 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by Richard - 05-14-2017, 05:09 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by Szczepan - 05-14-2017, 07:39 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by Richard - 05-14-2017, 11:28 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by nibbed - 05-14-2017, 11:33 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by Richard - 05-14-2017, 11:49 AM

RE: First Edit: Wandering - by nibbed - 05-14-2017, 12:27 PM

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