05-14-2017, 01:23 AM
a stone is just a stone
still
and dead
how close then
would I have to get
to see
to feel
the atoms dance ~I love these last two lines, especially. VERY poetic.
and sparkle in the void
Hi vagabond
I think this poem is very courageous, and beautiful. I didn't know how to approach it because it seems perfect. Stones can come in many forms, but they are all just stones. Sometimes they might hurt, even destroy. Sometimes they are even beautiful and don't hurt at all. I thought about when we hit two stones together and it makes sparks. This poem is very true.
I hope you are blessed today, vagabond.
janine
still
and dead
how close then
would I have to get
to see
to feel
the atoms dance ~I love these last two lines, especially. VERY poetic.
and sparkle in the void
Hi vagabond
I think this poem is very courageous, and beautiful. I didn't know how to approach it because it seems perfect. Stones can come in many forms, but they are all just stones. Sometimes they might hurt, even destroy. Sometimes they are even beautiful and don't hurt at all. I thought about when we hit two stones together and it makes sparks. This poem is very true.
I hope you are blessed today, vagabond.
janine
there's always a better reason to love