05-10-2017, 06:18 AM
ahh.. a fake mary and a real christ. that is original.
but the "poor" child serves only to ignite the reader´s anger towards those .. parasites, trash, impostors..
sorry, this is no constructive critique, it´s the sarcastic response that poem evokes in me.
but the "poor" child serves only to ignite the reader´s anger towards those .. parasites, trash, impostors..
sorry, this is no constructive critique, it´s the sarcastic response that poem evokes in me.

