cherished
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" I wrote the poem when I was feeling terribly sad (and worried some). "

so.. it might have been a prayer.
maybe if you somehow include those feelings of sadness and worry in your poem.. don“t close your eyes to suffering, not even to your own.
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cherished - by nibbed - 05-07-2017, 10:56 AM
RE: cherished - by Richard - 05-07-2017, 12:46 PM
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RE: cherished - by tectak - 05-07-2017, 04:39 PM
RE: cherished - by nibbed - 05-07-2017, 11:29 PM
RE: cherished - by tectak - 05-08-2017, 04:24 AM
RE: cherished - by nibbed - 05-08-2017, 07:51 AM
RE: cherished - by 67eager - 05-08-2017, 11:03 PM
RE: cherished - by nibbed - 05-09-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: cherished - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 10:00 PM
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RE: cherished - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 10:46 PM
RE: cherished - by Mark Cecil - 05-10-2017, 05:34 AM
RE: cherished - by vagabond - 05-10-2017, 09:55 AM
RE: cherished - by Achebe - 05-10-2017, 10:11 AM



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