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how can i give criticism when i don´t have a clue what the author wanted to express? this would be stumbling around blind or at least severely visually impaired (i wear glasses by the way because i don´t want to be visually impaired).
once i have a glimpse of meaning/ message i can start to search for ideas how to transport said message better (if i can think of improvements).
without some discussion concerning the interpretation all i could say about this poem is: the meaning is not sufficiently clear but it transports feelings of denial and helplessness.
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< joining jesus > - by rayheinrich - 05-07-2017, 07:55 PM
RE: < joining jesus > - by dukealien - 05-07-2017, 09:34 PM
RE: < joining jesus > - by RiverNotch - 05-08-2017, 01:31 AM
RE: < joining jesus > - by nibbed - 05-08-2017, 03:34 AM
RE: < joining jesus > - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 06:50 PM
RE: < joining jesus > - by tectak - 05-09-2017, 07:54 PM
RE: < joining jesus > - by rayheinrich - 05-09-2017, 09:40 PM
RE: < joining jesus > - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 08:58 PM



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