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< joining jesus >
                               
i was joining jesus to his cross                                                  
using galvanized 6 inch decking screws
and that cordless drill
you gave me for christmas                                     that´s really a good association for sacrificing christ 
when the phone rang
and it was some roman
wanting his sword back
i'm sorry
to hear about your condition                                    
maybe the second opinion
will be better                                                        i would believe that hidden behind those often-used words you  unmask a mixture of helplessness and denial
today
was too warm for january
it woke the squirrels
and the neighbors
gnawing with motorized teeth                       makes me think of a chain saw (great metaphor even if you meant something else).

made me skip a track
on my next belief                                          shouldn´t it be " to my next belief" ?                               
or some vitamin                                    
or arrangement of words                                
that could have fixed it all for me                       ... the next belief, the next vitamin, the next wonder, the next insubstantiate hope for delivery 


so i'll just go back                                            
to nights
filled with black plastic bags                            and that is unfortunately where i can´t make sense for me
i don't know what's in them
but whatever it is
is leaking out



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please do not be offended for only trying to interprete, and  offering more questions than constructive criticism.

Vagabond....I doubt whether your comments would offend but interpretation is for you and the birds. Critique is what the forum requires...give it a try, you will learn as much from critiique as the writer.
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