05-09-2017, 10:05 AM
Hey ellajam,
Thanks for the feedback. I originally had the second strophe broken into three parts, so I can't help but wonder if that would help with improving its clarity. I'm such an anti-punctuation poet. I feel like I should create a cool name for that.
Thanks again,
Richard
Thanks for the feedback. I originally had the second strophe broken into three parts, so I can't help but wonder if that would help with improving its clarity. I'm such an anti-punctuation poet. I feel like I should create a cool name for that.
Thanks again,
Richard