Falling Toward Grace

[Szczepan]

Growing through loneliness
Just don't let me end up like this 
I figure all I can do *** great 2 lines that could be the centerpiece of a rock love song ... and that's a good thing!
Is wallow over you ***
Til alone gets great <<< not sure if the 1st 4 lines were accidental rhymes but the pattern is broken ... Me, I *like* broken patterns somehow if the intended impact is supposed to be jolting ... is that what you are going for?
Or normal
Til I've stayed up out of arms <<< wouldn't change a thing
Long enough to stop feeling phantoms <<< wouldn't change a thing except maybe remove "Long"
I think a little pain might be the bridge  <<< <<< wouldn't change a thing except maybe remove "I think"
From here to heaven <<< sums up nicely what are actually 4 powerful lines!
Or here to standing straight
And maybe one day
After falling forever with no net
I'll land soft and gentle
In my own life.

Good Job. Evoked kinda a "been there, done that" feeling ... which I guess all of us have had at one time or the other.